Unorganized plot

If for a moment, we leave alone the words he pens down, what appeals more to the readers is the correct expression of the thoughts and feelings. It is evidently noticed in Salman Rushdie's 'Midnight Children' how he had brought whole of the plot and had been so expressive and laconic simultaneously. Chetan Bhagat's writings lack this quality to a great extent. Flipping through the pages of the same novel, you'll come across the protagonist describing his meeting with his beloved spread across some 15 pages including each and every minor detail like how she takes care of her dupatta, how she blushes and a hundred other of the kind, and then you'd see the final pages winding up the whole story so abruptly. It so happens that if you read the last pages of the writer's novels, you'd be bemused if you actually read the novel or just glanced at the summary !